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Well this was planned to be done traditionally. Hell, I was anxious to do it traditionally. But the inking came out.... terrible.  The original sketch was too awesome to scrap. So. Digital art because my backup plan. I freaking adore this. After I redid the original lines, it looks awesome. This took about a good week on Gimp. I love Gimp's pressure sensitivity. Makes things sexy. This is going to be a new series! Epic Mini Doodles! A little perspective, action poses, and done digitally! I can't wait to see them all done myself :^D. Critiques are open. Please don't stress me on the pose. I know it looks odd. Try Critiquing my "Digital skills". ©=ShadowKirby22107 Edited. Fixed a few anatomy things. Comments
 I love your coloring its like
DETAILED -- When super-villains want to scare each other, they tell Joker stories. DETAILED
-- ?!?!!?!? What you lookin at? I BEH SHADOW KIRBY!!!  goood
-- Basic Instructions Before Leaving Earth I'm a Robot that is Red.  *throws Malay at him*
*shot down* Lol it is epic though BURNIN RING OF FIAAAA! -- The ghost of my cactus is laughing at you...  the game GAAAAAAAAAADKJHDHDLKFJHDKLJFHKJDFJGBDF FIYAH
-- ?!?!!?!? What you lookin at? I BEH SHADOW KIRBY!!! gooood
-- ?!?!!?!? What you lookin at? I BEH SHADOW KIRBY!!! very goood.
-- Basic Instructions Before Leaving Earth I'm a Robot that is Red. indeed
-- ?!?!!?!? What you lookin at? I BEH SHADOW KIRBY!!!  this is too cool
detailed fingers are detailed -- Avatar base thanks to =Coy-Shinigami era. :I hawt pr0ns here-> [link] |
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Critiques
First off, I love the lighting on the hand. When I saw the WIP for this, it looked odd, but now that you've added the rest of the flames, it looks amazing. Especially with the overall flow of them (something I ultimately suck at when drawing fire).
Now onto the actual critiquing part...
The face: Excellent work on the expression, SKhat adds humor to it too!
Pose: Very epic and dynamic, nice work!
Overall anatomy: Aaaand here comes the part that bugged me...
The leg that's further from the camera just bugs me to no end. How it's thicker near the base and significantly thinner as you go further down the leg. Perhaps changing the perspective on the leg would be a quick and good fix.
Fire: Once again, love the flow you've got going on there! There's definitely significant movement. And I love how it actually looks as if his fingers are on fire, rather than it looking like a fireball with a hand slapped on it, excellent!
However, I've always got a beef with people who use excessive smudging with fire. What I'd do instead is play around with pressure sensitivity pertaining to size and opacity both, it's great for fire effects!
Background: A white background just clashed immensely, IMO, whereas a black background would have really accented this. However, as you stated, it's a doodle, so you can do as you wish there. :T
And I have just one thing left to say: How on earth do you draw clothes so well? xD
That is all, I'll shut up now. C:
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